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Journal entry n°1: TFSW Project


Hi everone!! I'm here to talk to you today about this very important project of mine: The Fifth Shinobi War (or TFSW for shorter titles :-p ). Before I begin, I would like to thank you all for reading this!!


So!! There it goes: :)

The Fifth Shinobi War is a lengthy fanfiction toiling around the themes of friendship, despair, courage and love. :)

Here is a short resume: As Jiraya of the Sanin comes back yo Konoha alive, months  after Madara's defeat, Orochimaru  has finally managed to defeat Sasuke and take over his body; the war against Konoha, and the nations of the Alliance, is declared. Believed to be an easily resolved conflict, the war takes an expected importance as shinobies fall one after the other – Naruto, the latest war's hero, is one of the first to disappear. Terrorised, despaired, in constant danger, Konoha's ex-rookies take the head of the resistance even as they see the number of their own deaths grow. Centered upon Shikamaru, Hinata, Ino, Tenten, Choji, Gai, Jiraya, Konohamaru and Shizune, this fanfiction shows the characters' evolutions as they fight, day after night, against despair and for a better world.


No character – absolutely none! - are bashed here. If Naruto and (spoiler!) Sakura die in the early chapters, it is not because I do not like those characters (which I don't, especially Sakura, who I believe is awesome!) but because of the story's necessity. There are pairings, the most important one being Jiraya and Tsunade ( <3 <3 <3 ) , but also very importantly Shikamaru and Temari, Ino and Choji, Gai and Shizune. There are hints of Naruto and Sakura, Tenten and Neji (as much as possible considering the manga's recent events...), Lee and Tenten (maybe? At least as very best friends!! ) and there may be some Naruto and Hinata near the end.

I know that Naruto is the main character of the series, that a fanfic without him makes little sense. No worries! He dies near the beginning, but will still have a great importance, and not just the memory of him! (Interested? Please read on :-p)

Indeed, the main reason for which I wrote this fanfic is that I am sick and tired of Naruto being the center of every one's thoughts and exploits in the manga. I love him, but he's just everywhere!! In almost every chapter! It seems none of them can do anything without Naruto around! It's so annoying :'( I wanted to change that, to show that even without Naruto, every character in the serie is worth something. Even if I love the guy.  

That is the second reason for this serie – Hinata in the show. She's too much in Naruto's shadow! It seems that every thought she has, every action she does, is linked to him. I'm sorry, but I disagree. :-p I think Hinata's charcter is beautiful and must be developed; that is precisly the second reason I'm writing this. I always imagined Hinata's evolution: how she goes over her shyness (not only about Naruto :-p), how her strength evolves, and how she becomes a courageous and intelligent leader. That is the Hinata I wanted to show, one that doesn't differ much from the series but continues her evolution and that steps out of Naruto's shadow.

Another reason for writing this fanfic is that I've been wanting to become an author since I was a child, but I've abandonned all my novels (2 to date :-p) because the characters lack depth and the writing style. So, please consider this as a transition from the age where you wish to write a novel but are not mature and skilled enough to do so, to one where it becomes possible. I'm trying to improve all of those aspects and I hope this will show in my writing...

Finally, the last, but definetly not least, reason I'm writing this. Jiratsu. There just isn't enough fanfictions around Jiraya and Tsunade... So this one will be. I swear, I'll show you beautiful Jiratsu scenes and make anyone reading this love this couple as much as I do. I know I can :D Believe it!


Soo, there you go. This is what the Fifth Shinobi War will be about, and the why's concerning it. :)

Thank you so, so much for reading this. I hope you'll be interested in reading my fanfic ;)


P.S.: I have fallen in love, most litterally, with English literature this year. Emily Dickinson, E.M. Forster, Shakespear, Tennysson, Yeats... I love them so much I decided to make a small reference to them in the form of a quotation at the beginning of each chapter. The quotations will obviously be linked to the chapter and will give you a hint of what will be happening.

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:iconwaxingbluemoon:
thanks for the message! feel kind of honored to be noticed haha Will definitely leave comments from now on ;) I just love how the stories are so richly investigated from different perspectives with detail descriptions revealing every subtlety of the characters as well as the background, not to mention, then, how those characters are so realistically enlivened with furthur imagination without significantly compromising the familiarity! (from more personal pov, since I'm a big fan of Jiraiya, especially looooved the first chapter where not only he came back alive but also the reactions of Naruto and Tsunade were so....Waaaah!  lemme just give you a big hugLove !! hehe) looking forward to read the next chapter of TFSW as well as any more stories from ur future career as a writer! hopefully this long comment sort of makes up for the comments I could have left under each chapter XP
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:iconalleemaria:
alleemaria Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2014
Hahaha oh man, thank you so much!! I'm literally blushing all over right now :D
I'm the honored one :D My dream is to become an author someday (haha I keep repeating myself) and your comment makes me so happy and proud,  thank you so much!! :D
Me too, I'm totally in love with Jiraya and Tsunade haha :D Don't worry, I'll have looaads of scenes with them, and Jiraya is one of the main characters of this fanfic, you won't misss him ;)
Oh hahaha thank you so much!! Here's a big hug back to you!! <3 :D
Hahaha oh thank you so much again!! I'll do my best to post the next chapter very soon, but I don't have time to write, Uni is so overwhelming, grr :-p
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:iconrespectlo:
respectlo Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2014
Hi what's up ?
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:iconalleemaria:
alleemaria Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014
Hey!! :)
Hahaha school and the equivalent of A-levels are very saddly the only things that are up right now for me, if that's what you mean^^'
Not much time for anything else, sorry :/
You? ;)
(small add: chapter 4 is soon up too!!! XD)
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:iconrespectlo:
respectlo Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014
Same thing xD School xD
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:iconalleemaria:
alleemaria Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Not cool eh ;p
Um... I'm sorry you deleted your account :/
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:iconkitkatnis:
kitkatnis Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
hi
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:iconalleemaria:
alleemaria Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Hi!! :)
Um... How do you do?^^
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:iconkitkatnis:
kitkatnis Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol im good ^^
just thought id say hi to a naruto fan :D
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:iconalleemaria:
alleemaria Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
Hahaha I see... Great idea :D
Haha well hi back you, other cool Naruto fan :D
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